"Earlier this year, my little sister and I arrived in town fresh off of a cross-country drive from San Francisco . . . " What makes you think anyone gives a shit about your personal life? Wow, you went to New Orleans to drink and smoke in bars. Whoop-de-do. "Different bartender, different barflies, different conversations, and I make three new friends. This is just the way it works in New Orleans." Gee, that really does make New Orleans unique! Not!
There's hardly anything about the city itself! Write about the city, not your own personal life no one cares about! The only interesting thing was the interview and that was cut off in the paper! Very, very poor. rating: F