Unless you're getting paid by the word, there's absolutely no legitimate reason on God's green earth to ever use 20 words when three will do just fine. Amateur writers never seem to grasp this. They just keep blathering on and on without a thought in their wee little brains, convinced to the bitter end that volume somehow equals quality.
Let me let you in on a little secret: It doesn't.
Nothing could be more difficult than to write a smokin' short story in 117 words or less. If you think it's easy, that's only because you've never tried it.
Thankfully, plenty of our readers did try it, and the results were pretty damned fine. Alibi editorial intern Katy June-Friesen and I had a fine time digging through the mountain of entries and pulling out those worthy of the coveted Alibi seal of literary approval. It wasn't easy picking out the winners, but we did our best. (All complaints should be directed to email@example.com.)
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As if that weren't enough, all three of our winners will receive $40 worth of gift certificates to the Monte Vista Fire Station, four passes to the Guild Cinema, plus a packet of delicious Quaker Oats Instant Oatmeal (either Apple/Cinnamon or Maple/Brown Sugar, depending on the luck of the draw). Just in time for the bugs of summer, we've also generously thrown in a collectible heavy plastic Alibi flyswatter, for your mosquito-squashing pleasure. Congratulations to everyone, and heaps of thanks to all who participated.
Keep those pencils sharp. We'll begin accepting submission for our 14th annual Haiku Contest, the grand pooh-bah of Alibi literary contests, sometime next month.
Then Mary cleared her throat and tried to sell Caesar on the resurrection. Caesar chortled and sipped his Chianti. "It's as likely as that egg you're holding turning scarlet."
The egg in Mary's hand dripped maraschino red.
"And it's as likely as olives sprouting from my fingertips," I said and held up my hand, on which I had stuck pitted olives.
The centurions escorted me away. Nobody in Rome has a sense of humor.
Except Mary ... her lips twitched.
"Pearl and Loretta Go Roof Climbing During a Storm"
Six and a half scratches on my knee, only one on my arm. Pearl looks up into God's backyard. Where does He set stuff down? Don't His sneakers step clean through the clouds hitting people in the valley on the head? Me, I'd make some tables and floors.
He looks over here, spatters us with raindrops like grease from an overheated
skillet when the potatoes are first dropped in. Mama said He was black
as a skillet. He's crooked, too, from the damp. Pearl saw Him warming up those
big, old bones of His on the sun before. I'd rather lean by the oven when Mama
Two people have lost their way inside a Sears portrait. A canyon looms behind them unrelated to their particular longitude and latitude. The sun does not acknowledge their shadows. They are truly lost. The woman appears confused, perhaps in pain, suddenly 10 pounds heavier in an alien landscape. Her husband's dilemma is one awkward nostril. The photographer blinks, and they are in front of a wobbly replica of Stonehenge. "Don't lean on the henge!"
The woman falls. Her husband wonders how a photographer can work without the
protection of thick goggles and lead apron when stretching atoms like taffy,
lopping off the third dimension ... compressing blood, bone ... the substance
of yellow capri pants and sunglasses. ...
His back leaned on the black mold that grew on the deserted trailer's dusty, peeling, pressboard wall. His legs stretched across the tilting floor. His head rested inches below the oxidized aluminum frame of the missing window that opened on bare desert.
He scratched his upper lip with the barrel, tasting the heavy tang of the metal, the hint of bluing and oil, and inhaling deeply the sulfurous residue of the first two shots he had idly fired through the trailer wall a half-hour earlier.
Unexpectedly, from outside he heard the playfulness of young voices, fresh
with the discovery of an abandoned trailer, a target for innocent, youthful
vandalism. It was a bad place to die.
Penelope Cordial and her brother, Lemmon, simply loved snakes, especially larger
snakes, like the Anaconda. They spent years studying them, and were considered
to be experts amongst the residents of their small town of Carbonated Soda,
Iowa. Being experts, they knew that snakes could never achieve sizes any larger
than 40 feet or so, due to the inability of serpent organs to circulate fluids
properly in a cold-blooded beast of that size. This was a comfort to them. They
had no fear of giant snakes like many children do, because they knew such creatures
could never exist. Sadly, 20 feet is plenty long enough to kill a youngster,
which is why Penelope is now an only child.
James T. Carlson
My mother told me when we were young she broke down crying in the pea patch one caramel-sticky day in June. I was spraying my brother in the jaw with the garden hose. My sister was dismembering the marigolds. This is not the life she wanted, knees chapped by dirt, three imp children under the age of three. She had studied in New York. She was supposed to be an orchestra conductor, baton poised in air with the gravitas of a goddess.
"But mom," I said, "the white butterflies fluttering in arpeggio around your
head, the fluted cornstalks, the timpani sun, your Valkyrie children storming
the heavens ... Wagner, mother. It was pure Wagner."
Dot wasn't much of a town, really; just our trailer, and a shed we kept cement in. But, it was the only place around, so it was on maps, and had a sign, and every term my dad got reelected Mayor.
Until I turned 14, that is, and ran against him—on a platform promising no school or chores for the kids, and a taxpayer-funded cleaning service for my mom.
I won, too.
My dad beat me good for that—assaulted a public figure, I should say—so I had
to have the state troopers come pick him up.
"Why I'm Not a Pony in Freud's Dog and Pony Show"
Halloween in Holland. Costume equals pregnant-
Amanda Y. Short
Once there was a queen the size of a penny. She was small and round and flat. She was called upon to make a royal decision, life or death by coin flip. She landed tails.
While the convict was being buried, the queen was polished to a high gleam in between the flipper's fingers. His forehead sweated with responsibility. Did he flip the queen too softly? He hadn't wanted to drop her. Now a man lay in the ground whose fate he'd held in his hands.
The people called it royal mandate, but the flipper knew the queen was a figurehead.
He made a wish to be freed from guilt and flicked the penny in the grave.
"Choose me," I heard Angel say over your shoulder.
You turned, stroked her cheek, and pinched her bottom lip like a kiss. "No," you whispered and let her go.
She picked up her luggage, stepping on the spilled popcorn and spearing it on her heels, and stumbled out of the bar.
I spun on my barstool with victory. You counted the money you'd stolen from her and stuck it back in your pocket. I picked one of Angel's feathers off the counter and blew it in your face.
"You're a smart man," I said. I slid my hand down your back, already picking
your pocket, and gave you a flicking slap with my red tail.
"Employee of the Month"
She couldn't believe her fantasy had come true. She was making love with Jesus, a man she had admired from afar. As she felt his mule kicking in her stall, she flushed with guilt over her marriage. Oh well.
Their flesh joined and produced a musky fragrance, permeating the lady's room of the Wal-Mart he had been cleaning. She knew from the moment she laid eyes on his sinewy, dark frame she was destined for this.
Gazing into his limpid brown eyes (her ass on the cold sink edge) warmth came
over and in her. She broke the spell, glancing at his tattooed chest. In blue-black
ink it read: "Made in China."
Deborah A. Rivera
Author's Disclaimer: This is fiction not fact. Any resemblance to anyone living or dead is simply coinkydink.
Once, a boy named Bruce, had a play-day with his friend.
And once he saw Bruce his eyes poped out. Bruce looked so handsome!
Ryin was jelas!
But Ryin had a plan!
They desided a slep-over. Once Bruce was aslep, Ryin got a per of sissers.
And he cut Bruce's toe's off with them! Tody everyone call's Bruce Sissy-no-toe's.
Once a boy named Sissy-no-toe's had a play-day with his friend.
Ailin O'Neall (second grader at Duranes Elementary School)
The girl I ride there with gives me a Starburst with something on it—acid, I guess—and that's cool, dancing, the girl, the freaks, the flashing gray light; and weird, on a separate floor, alone, weaving between drugged-out girls and boys flirting sluggishly with themselves; and bad, in a bathroom, exhausted, the walls pounding from the music, the doorknob rattling; and worse, in an alley next to the club, lying down near trash cans, watching a messy smear of a sun rise between buildings; and worse, being shaken awake, by the girl; and worse, feeling her hate me.
Walking down Central a bag lady screeches at me, "You for the war or against?" Her rheumy, icy eyes skewer.
"Against, because I've been there," I say and walk. On to Anodyne—that is not a euphemism. I order an elixir. I smoke a cigarette, and see death, smell blood, feel suffering.
Reaching for the drink I shake. Reflect. Grasp. Tremble to the lips then sip.
I've been sober for two years. Damn! The ghosts come back from a time of long
hair, long legs, and a five-foot bong named Fang. I am older now, ancient.
My lives crash into each other and beat their drums on my dead skull. Somewhere
a bell tolls for me.
Justin S. Tade
"My Mother was a Ghost"
She moved through the house with a spectral grace. She was hardly corporeal. As she did the dishes or folded the laundry or put us to bed wisps of smoke would escape through the miniscule cracks of her cobwebbed skin. We had to be careful when we touched her or pieces of her would stick to us. Feathery filaments we could never completely brush away.
And so on the eve of her suicide I smoke another cigarette watching the glowing
red numbers move me further into night, wondering was she ever really there.
More real to me in death than she ever was in life. My mother is a ghost.
"Postcard from Fort Peck Indian Reservation, Montana, June 1968"
How are you? Still stationed in Saigon? Last letter said your platoon was moving out. I'm O.K. Just finished manuscript and off-ed it to agent (Remember Dan?) Title? Maybe "Cinders of Shame," don't know yet. Big electric storm over rez last night. Old Joe said lightning hit one of his chickens.
Well, it's been almost a year now since your aunt has passed. Still feel empty but staying busy helps. For awhile there I thought the horse's head was turning my way but have put down the bottle. Maybe earth and sky and one can make two. Please be careful.
Proud of you,
Uncle 2 Guns
I am avoiding mosquitoes with waves of Skin So Soft oiling down my legs while I practice Farsi.
I remember another summer. I am 6. Mom and I have just moved. We have a grand piano and washing machine. Mom buys a Persian rug. We eat crosslegged and escape the midday heat on the rug. Its tomato and mulberry muted tones and nubbly texture form the geography of my childhood. By third grade, every picture I draw has the same Persian border.
I am now 51. My leg is in a cast. I chat on the phone with my Persian doctor
and friend. I will be able to walk next summer in Iran. Enshallah!
Startled, I raised my eyes from the uninteresting, yet safe, floor to look at the old man.
"Go right," he had said.
He looked crazy.
Of course, all the old men on the bus looked crazy to me. Especially ones that stopped swatting imaginary flies long enough to stare at me so intensely that I could not look away, even scared as I was by his certainly contagious dementia.
Again, the Demon spoke.
And out of stinking, yellow breath spewed forth the words, "Go right."
Damn if I was gonna catch his madness.
I got off, and immediately ran across the street to my left.
I never saw the truck coming.
I should have gone right.
At dusk the American left the Hotel Intercontinental Karachi in a three-wheeled jitney for a destination known by the driver as the source of 'sheesh. Familiar territory was soon buried deep in the mercy of the less fortunate. Puttering to a halt, the driver disappeared down the dirt road's bank into the dusty underworld. With heart racing through the wait, our American was all alone. The driver was faintly heard emerging from some gloomy shack below, and of a sudden rematerialized in our victim's tricyclic waiting room announcing 'sheesh! One whiff verified the brick's validity.
Earlier that day, a clay brick ascended through six pairs of hands to be lodged
in a wall of Quaid-e-Azam's tomb.
“We Met a Modern Dancer in Rome”
Today trench coated, nerdy-glasses man approached to discuss U.S. politics while we visited yet another Catholic Church. But here 5 o'clock mass preparations were completed by a Teva-clad monk who lit the altar candles with the loud click of his cigarette lighter. In the winking gaze of our Lord and Savior, I close my eyes and am comforted to see that Superman is still fighting evil and Joan Jett is still played on MTV; that The Best of 2003 has reached record sales and orange is the new pink. Rome—the city of lost hopes and dreams, where our tour guide was a dancer who knew the best gelato in town.
Amanda Y. Short
It was less than three bites, he figured, staring at the far corner booth and the man who had completed eating the whole thing in one go. Even by American standards the triple bacon green-chile and barbecue sauce mega burger was a monster of a sandwich. Yet the man in the booth managed to make it disappear.
In awe, he walked tentatively over to the fellow who managed the feat.
"I think you might be my hero." He said as a way of introduction.
The man in the booth wiped away a portion of the sauce coating his chin, gave a small shrug, and replied with a grin:
"If that's so, why don't you buy me another?"